The best opening message changes with the situation — what hooks a senior engineer won't move a sales lead, and an InMail reads nothing like a connection request or a cold email. Set the seniority, role, industry and channel below for openers and follow-ups drawn from the outreach data we collect on our platform.
Hi {{firstName}}, your work on {{topic}} at {{company}} stood out — we're hiring a {{role}} and your background is a near-perfect fit. Worth a 15-minute chat to see if the scope matches what you're after?
Hi {{firstName}}, I'll keep this short — we're looking for someone to lead {{team}} and your track record building and shipping at {{company}} is exactly the profile. Open to comparing notes this week?
Hey {{firstName}}! Came across your profile while looking for a {{role}} — really like how you've grown your stack around {{topic}}. We're building something I think you'd enjoy. Mind if I share the details?
Hi {{firstName}}, We're growing the {{team}} team at {{company}} and your experience scaling teams in {{industry}} is the kind of leadership we're after. Would a short intro call next week be worth your time? Best, {{senderName}}
Hi {{firstName}} — I'm connecting with promising {{role}} talent in {{industry}}. Love your early projects on {{topic}}. Would be great to have you in my network as we open new roles.
Hi {{firstName}}, your campaigns at {{company}} caught my eye. I work with {{industry}} teams on growth roles and would love to connect — no pitch, just keen to follow your work.
Hi {{firstName}}, floating this back to the top of your inbox — still think the {{role}} role is worth 15 minutes of your time. Want me to send a few slots?
Hi {{firstName}}, no worries if the timing's off. One thing that tends to land with {{industry}} folks: the team owns {{topic}} end-to-end, no hand-offs. Happy to walk you through it whenever suits.
Hey {{firstName}}, totally understand if now isn't the moment. If it helps, I can send a short overview of the {{role}} role so you have it for later — just say the word.
Hi {{firstName}}, last note from me so I'm not cluttering your inbox — is the {{role}} direction something you'd consider this year, or should I check back down the line?
Hey {{firstName}}, just bumping this 🙂 even a quick "not now" helps me know whether to keep you posted on {{role}} openings at {{company}}.
Hi {{firstName}}, Circling back once more. If a {{role}} move isn't on your radar, no problem — but if you know someone strong in {{industry}}, a referral would mean a lot. Thanks, {{senderName}}
These templates top out at role level. Everyjob personalises every message per candidate, runs the whole sequence across LinkedIn and email, and pulls replies into one shared inbox.
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